Friday 1 March 2013
Amber's 100 Word challenge Week 21
The car stopped suddenly. Flash back. Well it all started earlier today. I was in the middle of a maths lesson and two boys were throwing paper at me so I was about to hit one of them but they ducked and it hit the teacher. At the end of the maths lesson I got really told off. The boys have been bullying me for two weeks now. At the end of the day, I was on my way to catch the bus and the boys came and pushed me into the road. scared and worried, upset and hopeless, I lay in the hospital bed.
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I really like how you used a flashback to tell your story Amber. I enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge and think that your last sentence is very powerful. Keep up the wonderful writing!
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