Friday 8 February 2013

Poppy's 100 Word Challenge - Week 18

As I strolled down the street, the sun was shining brightly. I was humming my favourite song, Hey Jude. Suddenly out of the blue the sky started turning black! Dark clouds hid the sky and it started raining heavily, but this wasn't rain it was oil. Meanwhile, the trees were dying and the
grass was turning brown.All the natural things were being destroyed, yet everything man made was growing. This was my worst nightmare, I love the natural world. What should I do? I ran back to my house. the world was falling apart. This was the end...
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:45

    Hi,
    We are from Springwell Junior School, Ash Class.
    We do the 100 word challenge too. You can see it on our blog.
    We think you have really good imagination.
    Look at the third sentence and make sure it makes sense.
    From Jasleen and Ruben

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  2. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:54

    Hello Poppy, I am Jaya from Springwell Junior School.

    I think your 100 word challenge was great!
    It had so much description in it.
    I look forward to reading more 100 word challenges! :-)

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  3. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:56

    Hi Its me again sunny I enjoyed your 100 wc it was amazing keep writing cool !!! :-) keep it UP

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  4. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:56

    WOW! That was amazing what will happen next?

    Saleem & Nikhil (Ash class)

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  5. Charlotte [maple]8 February 2013 at 21:22

    Hi Poppy,
    I love your hundred word challenge, you made it very creative, such as it raining oil! It was a very good way to use your 100 words. I also liked how you said at the end, This was the end, it gives your story a thriller. From the start when you were humming your favorite song,I pictured something happy.
    From Charlotte.

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  6. Anonymous10 February 2013 at 16:06

    Hi poppy that was a really good i like when you said dark clouds hid the sky



    from zafirah in ash class

    come vist ash class

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  7. Lauren W (Maple class)1 March 2013 at 12:13

    Hello Poppy,I love your 100 WC,it was really creative. I wonder what will happen next I really want to know more.When you said you were humming,I pictured something really nice.

    From Lauren

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  8. Emelia(maple)1 March 2013 at 13:50

    Wow Poppy! This 100 word challenge is amazing. I love the creativity that you have used! The vocabulary you have included. Things like strolled instead of walked and humming instead of singing. You made me want to know what was next to come. I also like that you made it rain oil because it is unusual and different. Well done.
    From Emelia

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