Friday 1 February 2013

Liam's 100 Word Challenge - Week 17

Hello my friends, no one’s probably read this but let me carry on. I live in a farm, poor, no way to get money, well that’s what I thought anyway! So let’s start, it was a terrible windy storm day. But Me my Mum, Dad and were at the cheapest shop we could find. The island bay. I hate that shop! So I went to the outside garden. I was searching around. But as I was searching, I saw a key. I picked it up and blew it. I saw an address on it. “NOOOOOOO,LET ME HAVE THAT KEY!”
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6 comments:

  1. Isaac H1 February 2013 at 14:41

    OOH, I wonder why you wanted that key so disparately, and who's address it is!? I really like this 100wc, very unusual and creative, but also I can tell you've thought about every word. Well done, you should be proud!

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  2. Matty1 February 2013 at 14:55

    Hi,
    Well done Liam!I like that it was mysterious and I especially like the part: 'Hello my friends, no one’s probably read this but let me carry on'

    from Matty

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  3. klaud1 February 2013 at 14:57

    Hello Liam you think no one probably read this you are wrong and this 100wc are good. I hate that shop too

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  4. Mitchell1 February 2013 at 18:07

    Well done liam! AMAZING 100 word challenge!
    Keep up the good work.
    From Mitch

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  5. Laura (Team 100WC)4 February 2013 at 14:00

    Well done, Liam! You have used the prompt, which was the photo of the mysterious key this week, very well. I would really love to know what happens next!

    Keep up the good work! :)

    Laura (Team 100WC)

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  6. Harrison6 February 2013 at 11:21

    Hello Liam,
    Well done! I think this is amazing yet I am confused, what was the address and who said NOOO, let me have that key! You have used lots of adjectives 'stormy'. Harrison at 6d.2012.highlawnprimary.net

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