Friday 1 February 2013
Lauren W's 100 Word Challenge - Week 17
I saw that some thing was going on in the woods it looked like a fire but I don't know what it was so I took a little trip to a the woods when I heard, “Oi come here!” I thought my home is a minuet away I could just run but I wearing high heels. So of course I had to the fast walk so then BANG! I tripped over and… My worse night mare came true I was lost. My keys my phone—wait my KEYS! I needed them . But I was too late my house was in smoke all my belongings in the dump what could I do ?...
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What an interesting story Lauren, I wander why you were wearing high heels? And who set your house on fire? There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, and some of your sentences might possibly need a comma! However, this is a very good 100wc, and you should be proud!
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