Thursday 10 January 2013

Prologue by Callum

Prologue
 The lighthouse was the tallest, most proudest building in all the land, towering above all citizens. In the lighthouse, the hard working Keeper was planning his letter, to the Mayor. The loud noisy Villagers were partying just too loud for the Keeper. Angrily, he blocked the sound by slamming the window shut.
 Quickly, the window open also, the lighthouse candle blew out, giving the Keeper no light at all! Then, the next worrying thing happened, it was like someone turned the light of the lens off. Without thinking, he grabbed a lantern and sped up a flight of stairs to the watch room. “BEEP!” Came the Boat. Desperately, the Keeper rushed up to the lantern room, trying to fix the lens. The Boat loomed nearer and nearer towards the lighthouse and also the treacherous rocks…
 The Keeper picked the lens up, trying to fix it. Unfortunately, he tripped up the toolbox, falling to the ground with the lens. The light of the lighthouse was shattered into pieces. The Boat would crash…

3 comments:

  1. Hannah (Spring well Ash class)14 January 2013 at 11:53

    Wow Callum you are a very creative writer and I really enjoyed reading your discription

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  2. Great prologue Callum! I especially like the part where 'The Boat loomed nearer and nearer towards the lighthouse and also the treacherous rocks…' and the part the treacherous rocks. Well done.

    Matty :)

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  3. well done callum i like your prolgue great story well done :) aaron

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