Thursday 10 January 2013

An Island Adventure - A Prologue

We are busy writing some island adventure stories.  We decided to have a prologue to let our reader know how we arrived on the island.  The video of  The Lighthouse was a perfect way to get our imaginations going.  We decided to write about how our ship came to be wrecked by using the video and writing in the third person.  Our stories will then shift to the first person after the prologue.
Watch the video and scroll down to the posts below to read the prologues to our stories.


8 comments:

  1. that is a good video about a light house

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  2. Hello I'm Sunny from Springwell Junior School ash class the video was really good but the boat part where they put the lighthouse on the boat I didn't belive it

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  3. Hi we are from Ash class in Springwell Junior School.
    We really enjoyed your small clip.
    From Rodrigo, Ruben and Ayush

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  4. Very very interesting. Nice Work!
    from Bhavya and Shyloh Ash class Springwell Junior school London

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  5. Very good MAPLE CLASS maybe if you could make the boat crash it would be far more interesting, WELL DONE!!!
    ASH CLASS STUDENTS..

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  6. Great video sunny from ash class springwell junior school

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  7. Hi I am Ayush S from Ash Class. I reall liked watching this clip. Hope you enjoy learning about this topic.

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  8. I love the ending!

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