Friday 7 September 2012

Our Inspiration Poem

We have been reading a poem called 'If' by anonymous. We have been discussing the idea of our 'self-talk' this week and what we tell ourselves we can or can't do.
 We worked in collaborative groups to create our own parts of the poem.  We put all the parts together and came up with our class version. We wanted a poem that makes people reflect, think, and question.
What do you think?


Mind Talk – Your choice
By maple

If you think you’re not trusted,
You’re not.
If you think about bad thoughts,
Bad thoughts will think of you.

When you think you’ve failed a test,
You have.
If you want to argue, then you shall.

If everybody’s self-talk is negative,
The world will be a miserable place.

When you think you’re beaten, you’re sad.
Even if you try harder and harder, you’re mad.
Have you ever felt ashamed? You are.
If you feel afraid, you are.

If you don’t put in the pennies, you’ll never get the pounds.
Should you be in life’s tournament and you’re sure you’re done for,
Then my friend, you are.

When you think you can’t find the words,
You never will.
If you feel like you’ve fallen,
You have.
It’s all in the mind – what you think will happen, probably will.

Life begins when you start taking part.
If you believe in yourself, you will probably win.

Do you believe you can make it?
Because you can.
Have you never achieved something in life?
Have faith and you soon will.

Your life is in your hands.
Your choices are your destiny.
Life is good when you help other people.
You choose. 

5 comments:

  1. I think this is a great poem Maple class. It makes me think about the choices I have in my life. Do I want to be positive or negative? Well done. You have worked together well to create a thought provoking piece of work.

    Mrs Prior

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  2. Hi maple class
    Welcome back to school. We arelooking forward to blogging with you this year. Your poem is wonderful. It is very inspiring and I am sure that it will encourage you all to work hard, do your best and look after each other.
    Have a great year,
    Mrs Verona Gridley and SeniorG
    www.juniorsblackburn.edublogs..org

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  3. Wow. I love this! In our class we talk about always being positive towards all aspects of our life. I agree with everything that you have written and think it is inspiring!!

    Mr.Aiston
    Needle School, Telford

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  4. What a thought-proviking poem. We talk a lot about choices at my school, and it is really important to remember that we all have the choice to act how we want to act. This poem reaffirms that really well.

    Mr Harrison
    Headteacher
    Miriam Lord Primary School, Bradford.

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  5. I love this poem, it really shows what our class is capable of!! :-)

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