We took part in this year's first livewriting session today. We were using the story of The Black Hat by Maia Walczak.
We watched the video of the story without sound and wrote from the viewpoint of the boy. Have a look at our book. Follow the link inside the book to see the video. We wrote only part of the story and you can read them here.
What do you think of our stories?
You can see the whole livewriting process at:
http://livewriting.net/autumn-live-writing-with-brunswick/
Well done my class. Considering you only had a short space of time, you did really well. All of the children worked very creatively using the video prompt. Your feedback from the session was that you enjoyed it very much. Would you like to do more livewriting?
ReplyDeleteHi Maple class,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Maple. Keep up the hard work.
Sasha
Hi maple its Ashley,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing I loved all the stories keep on writing
Smiley (Ashley) =)
Hi maple its Ashley,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing I loved all the stories keep on writing
Smiley (Ashley) =)
Hey, it's Ashley! Hello!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I genuinely cannot think of a video that would be the representation of these crazy stories but nevertheless, they are all fantastic! I love the range of punctuation and description!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Maple Class and enjoy the rest of the year.
Well done everyone that done live writing i havent seen the vidio but i think it was good anyway i love the puncuation and describtion that you used!
ReplyDeletekeep up everyone
Elise
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ReplyDeleteI love your pargraph about the picture as I could just picture it in my head , next time why not add a few more simileys or even add personification.
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Dear Emilia ,
ReplyDeleteYour paragraph for the picture is really good. I like how you have described the animals and not just put there was animals in my room because that is plain . Next time you could desciribe the foreset for exsample creepy or mysteriouse forest . Aswell you could use somefeeling's for your main person in your story .
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